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      <title>Onex - Air Canada Media Wars</title>
      <description>&lt;p align="left"&gt;Lexpert Magazine&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p align="left"&gt;Any media-relations expert will                  tell you the most sought-after commodity desired by an                  organization is trust. It doesn't matter what industry the                  organization is in, having the trust of key stakeholder groups -                  customers, investors, employees - is everything. For much of                  last year Canadians watched the saga of the country's airline                  industry unfold as the chief players did what they could to gain                  public trust. Whoever best articulated their messages would win.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p align="left"&gt;A few legal tangles were thrown into the mix and in the end the                  law settled the matter, but not after a long bitter fight. Just                  before Christmas, Air Canada got the green light from the                  federal government to take over Canadian Airlines which had been                  teetering on the edge. Transportation Minister David Collenette                  and Competition Bureau Commissioner Konrad von Finckenstein both                  felt the arrangement was preferable to losing a major carrier                  and the 16,000 jobs that would go with it. Air Canada agreed to                  concessions that would protect service, fares, employee jobs,                  and - supposedly - competition. But even von Finckenstein                  admitted that having one carrier control 80 per cent of the                  domestic market was &amp;ldquo;dangerous&amp;rdquo;. Collenette didn't go that far,                  but did say &amp;ldquo;We've got to be very careful.&amp;rdquo;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p align="left"&gt;This year Ottawa will introduce legislation to keep fares in                  line and outline penalties for price-gouging, but Tory                  transportation critic Bill Casey doesn't buy it. He said it's                  mere &amp;ldquo;pretense&amp;rdquo; to expect competition in the skies. The man who                  is largely responsible for all this doesn't buy it either, but                  is no longer in the picture. His name is Gerry Schwartz. &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; On August 24, his company Onex Corporation made a bid to buy Air                  Canada and Canadian Airlines and merge them. The $1.8-billion                  deal was to be largely financed by Texas-based AMR Corp.,                  Canadian's controlling shareholder and the parent of American                  Airlines. The announcement hit Air Canada between the eyes and                  was an early litmus test for its new CEO Robert Milton who had                  been appointed only 18 days earlier. Just 39 years of age, he                  had his work out. Suddenly Air Canada was under attack like                  never before and soon it and Onex were engaged in not only a                  hostile takeover, but a war of words in the media. &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; Schwartz is a financier who built a small nondescript company                  which nobody ever heard of into a big powerful company which                  many Canadians still hadn't heard of - at least, until he made                  his bid for Air Canada. &amp;ldquo;I really didn't know much about Onex                  when this started,&amp;rdquo; says Laura Cooke, Manager of Media Relations                  for Air Canada's Central Canada office in Toronto. &amp;ldquo;But I do                  now.&amp;rdquo; What she knows is that Onex very nearly took over the                  airline and merged it with Canadian in the most hostile takeover                  attempt the transportation industry has ever seen here. It was a                  forever-breaking story that commanded the news for three solid                  months. It began August 13 when Ottawa suspended the industry's                  competition rules with Section 47 of the Canada Transportation                  Act, allowing the two airlines to merge or at least cooperate.                  Collenette also said he would shield any merger from a review by                  the Bureau of Competition Policy. Onex made its offer 11 days                  later. Coincidence? Maybe not. In the month before August 13,                  Onex was busy buying Air Canada stock. Schwartz, of course, had                  ties to the Liberal Party from way back and some media pundits                  declared that the fix was in. &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; With the Onex deal, AMR would own 14.9 per cent of a new Air                  Canada and have influence over the planned new airline through a                  series of agreements signed with Onex as part of the merger. It                  was estimated that at least 5,000 jobs at Air Canada and                  Canadian Airlines - 10 per cent of their combined work force -                  would disappear and further, that the number of domestic flights                  would drop. Added to these issues of jobs and service was the                  fact that American Airlines was lurking in the not-so-distant                  background of the deal which raised the specter of Americans                  controlling Canadian skies. &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; Needless to say, over the next 11 weeks Air Canada's Laura Cooke                  and her colleagues in media relations got used to working                  overtime. &amp;ldquo;We were in a virtual mode because the story was                  changing every day,&amp;rdquo; she says. &amp;ldquo;Reporters kept telling us this                  was the biggest business story of the year. There were so many                  players and so many issues, and we were under siege. We were                  also dealing with fierce competition in the media. It was                  extreme and while Onex had months to put its offer together, we                  needed time.&amp;rdquo; &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; When it was all over Air Canada emerged as the victor in a                  technical knockout. On November 5 a Quebec Superior Court                  announced that all and sundry must abide by the Air Canada                  Public Participation Act which said no one could own more than                  10 per cent of the shares of the airline. The players went back                  to their corners to lick their wounds, but much blood had been                  spilt. &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; How did the two organizations perform in their media relations?                  Let's see. Air Canada has three Media Relations managers in                  Toronto, Montreal and Vancouver. They talk to the press                  frequently and report to a Director of Corporate Communications                  at head office in Montreal. Doug Port, Senior Vice President of                  Corporate Affairs and Government Relations in Montreal, also                  gets quoted. After the Onex bid and Air Canada realized it had a                  fight on its hands, it went out and hired GPC, a government and                  media-relations consulting firm, to augment its existing                  communications capability. GPC participated in strategy                  sessions, wrote press releases and helped coordinate the Air                  Canada response. Air Canada also grabbed from retirement Hughie                  Riopelle, its former government-relations guru, and assembled a                  legal team of takeover strategists. But the key man was still                  new CEO Robert Milton. &amp;ldquo;He is a very strong communicator,&amp;rdquo; says                  Cooke. &amp;ldquo;His messages are always clear.&amp;rdquo; &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; And they were clear. The problem was those messages were late in                  coming and this drove the media, always operating from a sense                  of urgency, crazy. Beginning the last week of August, everyone                  wanted to interview Milton, but he wasn't talking. Meanwhile,                  Onex's Schwartz was criss-crossing the country in a                  profile-building, PR frenzy the likes of which corporate Canada                  hadn't seen before. He even appeared online on the Web                  current-affairs site Canoe.ca. &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; Air Canada was obviously caught unawares by the August 24 Onex                  bombshell and needed time to plan strategy. That left Onex as                  the only player in the media-relations game during those first                  few weeks and Schwartz was more than obliging. When confronted                  by the issue of American control, he said: &amp;ldquo;This whole                  subterfuge of trying to cloak us in American Airlines' control                  is utter nonsense. It's time we all got on with looking at what                  the real facts are and evaluating this offer on its merits, not                  on myths.&amp;rdquo; &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; Onex was somewhat of an unknown entity and without any in-house                  corporate affairs capability. It had no media-relations people,                  no government-relations staff, and not many staff period. It was                  a takeover specialist built from scratch by Schwartz with a                  stake in dozens of companies that did billions in sales, most of                  the revenues generated in the United States. It supplied such                  things as computer goods, airline-catering services and auto                  parts. Canada's business community knew who Schwarz and Onex                  were, but the Canadian people did not. &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; And then, seemingly out of nowhere, Onex embarked on a mission                  to remake Canadian skies. It retained Shandwick Public                  Relations, a firm with a strong reputation in public affairs. It                  also hired Bill Fox, one-time press secretary to Prime Minister                  Brian Mulroney and the former Ottawa and Washington Bureau Chief                  of The Toronto Star. Fox is a media consultant who wrote the                  book 'Spinwars: Politics and New Media' and was a founding                  partner of the Earnscliffe Strategy Group in Ottawa. He has                  taught at several universities, including Harvard, and is no                  stranger to the airline industry; back in the '80s he was an                  advisor to the federal government in the privatization of Air                  Canada. &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; &amp;ldquo;Nigel Wright of Onex called me,&amp;rdquo; Fox says. &amp;ldquo;Why did he call? It                  was because of the scope and scale of interest and the range of                  activity they were involved in. It involved three separate                  journalistic constituencies. First, the national political                  press. Second, the financial press who saw it as a straight                  business deal. And third, the local and regional press. Onex                  Corporation was well known in business circles, but less well                  known with the public. Part of the challenge for Onex was to                  answer some questions. Like who are they and are they Canadian.&amp;rdquo;                  Wright, who is a principal of Onex, didn't want to talk about                  the Air Canada thing now that it's water under the bridge. In                  fact, no one at Onex is even speaking to the press these days                  which doesn't sound like very good media relations for a company                  that was so much in the public eye. But Onex got out of the                  public eye as quickly as it got in. After November 5, Fox was no                  longer retained as a consultant, but was happy to speak about                  his three-month, whirlwind experience. &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; &amp;ldquo;This was an important change in airline transportation policy,&amp;rdquo;                  he says. &amp;ldquo;Onex had to acknowledge the public's legitimate                  interest and explain why the current system wasn't working, then                  explain why its solution was the right one. But any time you                  advocate change you have a challenge. Onex had a challenging                  message. Look, when you go to the airport the place seems full,                  the planes seem full, and you have to wait a long time to get                  your bag. That's what the public saw and they thought the system                  was okay. But most people weren't aware of the serious losses                  both airlines had incurred over the last ten years. &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; &amp;ldquo;Then Onex had to identify areas of concern. For some people                  foreign ownership was an issue because Onex was partnered with                  AMR. That was one story line. For others a bigger issue was                  monopoly. We would have only one national airline. And for                  others still the big thing was service and regional variations                  which in a place like Quebec City is a point of intense                  irritation. So we had to identify those story lines and speak to                  all of them. We had to get Schwartz out and about so people                  would see that he's a Canadian guy and a success story.&amp;rdquo; &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; Three weeks after its initial bid, Onex launched a series of                  newspaper ads to help get the message across. The business pages                  and the news pages were already full of the goings-on of Onex,                  Air Canada, Canadian Airlines and AMR, and now it was time for                  elaboration - from the horse's mouth. The first ad ran October                  13 and said what Onex was promising: a Canadian-owned airline,                  holding the line on ticket prices, being fair with employees,                  maintaining service to smaller communities, continuing seat                  sales, promoting fair competition. Two days later came a                  two-page ad with the left side completely blank except for the                  question: &amp;ldquo;Who are you guys anyway?&amp;rdquo; The right side identified                  Onex as a Canadian company with revenues of $14 billion. It                  talked about its rapid growth and success, and offered a web                  site where people could access more information. It also posted                  a 1-888 telephone number. &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; Says Fox: &amp;ldquo;We got Schwartz out to various centres. He went on                  open-line radio shows, made public appearances, and spoke to                  Chambers of Commerce and educational boards. I think people were                  taken with him and came to appreciate how he had thought about                  these problems and that he had a reasonable solution. But we                  knew we had a big challenge. We had to speak to consumers about                  their concerns and also to employee groups and institutional                  investors.&amp;rdquo; &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; The Onex ad of October 19 was particularly hard-hitting. &amp;ldquo;How's                  your airline investment doing these days?&amp;rdquo; said the headline,                  followed by: &amp;ldquo;Are you making money? Not at Air Canada you're                  not. Not so much as a dime in the last decade.&amp;rdquo; It said how for                  the past 15 years Onex companies had produced an average 33 per                  cent annual compound growth in the value of invested capital and                  mentioned companies like Celestica and Sky Chefs as examples.                  Once again it included the web site and 1-888 number. &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; The next day Air Canada came out with its own ad speaking of                  &amp;ldquo;Opportunity, not opportunism&amp;rdquo; and the dye was cast. Over the                  next two weeks it ran more ads with headlines like &amp;ldquo;Making                  sense&amp;rdquo; and &amp;ldquo;Truth or consequences&amp;rdquo;. The ads warned about foreign                  control and then they got more aggressive. &amp;ldquo;Who's flying the                  plane?&amp;rdquo; began one and said how Onex had no experience running an                  airline. That was followed by ads with the Air Canada logo front                  and centre beside the Onex logo, the latter with a line running                  through it. On November 3 and 4 more ads still displayed tables                  showing three columns: Onex says, Onex does, Air Canada replies.                 &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; Perhaps the best example of socking it to Onex was this one:                  Onex says - &amp;ldquo;Onex is an entirely Canadian company.&amp;rdquo; Onex does -                  &amp;ldquo;According to Canadian Business Magazine, Onex once described                  itself as a U. S. company that happens to be based in Canada,                  and said that being a market leader in Canada is like being a                  market leader in Kansas.&amp;rdquo; Air Canada replies - &amp;ldquo;Air Canada has                  always been a proud icon of Canada and remains 100% committed to                  keeping control in this country.&amp;rdquo; &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; The plan was to depict Schwartz as the bad guy who represented                  powerful U. S. interests intent on controlling our skies while                  Air Canada wrapped itself in the Canadian flag. The irony was                  that bad-guy Yankee Schwartz was a Canadian while Air Canada CEO                  Milton was an American. To muddle matters even more, the CEO of                  American Airlines was also a Canadian. &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; But even before the Air Canada ads started, the public wasn't                  entirely buying the Onex message. An Angus Reid survey conducted                  September 7-12 pegged Onex support at 42 per cent and another                  one done by Corporate Research Associates a few days later said                  it was only 33 per cent, so it seemed support was dropping. At                  the same time, however, most people did like the idea of a                  single airline. The Angus Reid survey showed support for that at                  68 per cent. So while people did accept some of what Schwartz                  was saying, they didn't accept enough of it to make them like                  his proposal. &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; Onex advisor Fox, an acknowledged media-relations expert,                  doesn't think the company's media campaign failed. &amp;ldquo;Air Canada                  won on a technicality,&amp;rdquo; he said. &amp;ldquo;In the week leading up to the                  court decision I thought Onex had a great week and we were                  optimistic. I believed our work was having some effect. But in                  the end, yes I was disappointed.&amp;rdquo; Fox is a media man who knows                  that perception can be more important than reality. When asked                  about the Onex messages on foreign ownership and service, he                  said the strategy was sound. &amp;ldquo;Sure foreign ownership was an                  issue, but as consumers we also want choice and in a country                  this size we can have one or the other. But not both.&amp;rdquo; The                  implication is that an industry which is totally Canadian may                  not necessarily provide the best service. Fox calls these &amp;ldquo;hard                  realities&amp;rdquo; about the airline industry. &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; Air Canada's Laura Cooke thinks Canadians aren't ready to give                  up control of their airlines, but even though the company took a                  nationalistic approach to its campaign, there was more to it                  than that. From a media-relations perspective, the strategy had                  three parts: reactive, rejecting the Onex proposal, and                  proactive. Air Canada also had to address three sets of legal                  processes: &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; 1. establish a shareholders' rights plan 2. initiate proceedings                  in federal court regarding Section 47 to challenge what Ottawa                  did in order to further clarify the Onex proposal and make it                  subject to review 3. apply to Quebec Superior Court and                  challenge the Onex proposal as illegal since it contravened the                  ten per cent rule according to the Air Canada Public                  Participation Act. &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; &amp;ldquo;Everybody talks about good media relations and strategy, but                  some things you can't plan for,&amp;rdquo; Cooke says. &amp;ldquo;Our media audience                  was growing. Reporters were calling us who knew nothing about                  the airline industry and they were getting hostile. But we had                  never been in a takeover position before. Our problem was we                  couldn't make an announcement until October 19. That was the                  first time you saw Robert Milton do a teleconference to formally                  reject the Onex proposal. Onex, meanwhile, kept saying 'where's                  Waldo' as to where Milton was. But that was part of our                  strategy. Here within Air Canada Milton kept telling us we're in                  no rush. In large measure, the legal uncertainties surrounding                  the Onex proposal drove our communications strategy. Milton                  himself called it a state of lawlessness.&amp;rdquo; &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; Four days after the Onex announcement, The Globe and Mail ran                  the headline &amp;ldquo;Will American Airlines dominate Canada's skies?&amp;rdquo;                  Air Canada's Doug Port was quoted: &amp;ldquo;Obviously we think &amp;hellip; that de                  facto AMR will be controlling the company.&amp;rdquo; But by and large,                  Air Canada wasn't saying much and while Milton was keeping mum,                  newspapers like The National Post and Globe and Mail were                  praising Schwartz's plan. Globe columnist Eric Reguly said                  Schwartz might not be the best person to rebuild the industry,                  but acknowledged that his proposal wasn't bad. &amp;ldquo;Most countries                  of middling size can't afford the luxury of two domestic                  airlines,&amp;rdquo; he wrote on August 24, the day the Onex plan was                  unveiled. &amp;ldquo;(Schwartz's) idea has merits. Buying Air Canada and                  Canadian and putting them under single management could save a                  fortune for both airlines. They could cooperate on some routes                  and compete on others.&amp;rdquo; &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; Onex was busy sending information sheets - they were called 'Blastfacts'                  - to the media to clear up any misinformation concerning its                  proposal, but the media is a fickle beast and Reguly was no                  exception. In a later column he christened the new would-be                  airline 'Schwartzflot' and quickly dismissed Schwartz's                  assurances of competition in the skies and no more than 5,000                  jobs being lost. He even called the whole proposal &amp;ldquo;an AMR                  takeover by proxy&amp;rdquo;. &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; When Air Canada finally launched its own ads, the battle looked                  like a heavyweight fight with both sides pummeling each other.                  Says Cooke: &amp;ldquo;We mounted our ad campaign in reaction to theirs.                  We felt a lot of mis-information was out there about the value                  of the Onex proposal and their interpretation of our proposal.&amp;rdquo;                  Through September and October the airline did regular opinion                  polling and the public apparently shared its concern over lack                  of clarity about the Onex proposal. After Milton stepped into                  the ring, Cooke says he was seen as straightforward and                  credible. &amp;ldquo;He helped us so much. I couldn't imagine this whole                  thing if we didn't have him.&amp;rdquo; &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; Air Canada's solution, spelled out in an ad, said the airline                  would buy Canadian and operate it as a subsidiary, but both Air                  Canada and Canadian would be distinct entities with separate                  head offices. Also, a proposed new partnership with Delta                  Airlines would help Canadian improve its trans-border service.                  Air Canada promised net reduction in employment of no more than                  2,500 and outlined what it called &amp;ldquo;shareholders gain&amp;rdquo;: &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; o buy back up to 35 per cent of Air Canada shares at $12 per                  share, or $800 million in cash o shareholders would own 100 per                  cent of an expanded, financially healthy company o no person or                  entity would have over 10 per cent ownership o no foreign                  control. &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; David Turnbull, Professor of Public Relations in the Corporate                  Communications Program at Toronto's Seneca College, Canada's                  biggest community college, thought Air Canada won the image game                  hands down. &amp;ldquo;A good analogy is doctors and nurses,&amp;rdquo; he said. &amp;ldquo;A                  doctor looks at a patient on the cellular level and a nurse on                  the human-response level. I think Onex was the doctor. They                  looked at the cellular point of view and talked about money.                  They wrongly assumed Canadians want to make money out of their                  airlines and I don't think that's true. They should have done                  their research to see what approach Canadians wanted. The ads                  weren't captivating, convincing or even logical. And they used                  inflammatory language which offended people. Air Canada did it                  differently. They were hard hitting, but positive words jumped                  out and what you saw was a solution. They offered clear logic on                  why Onex was the enemy of Canadians. I'm not surprised Air                  Canada won. They did their research and dealt with things on a                  human-response level rather than a cellular level.&amp;rdquo; &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; Turnbull says Air Canada scored points with its later ads that                  said Onex had no airline experience. Indeed, the full-pagers of                  November 3-4 were called, respectively, &amp;ldquo;Reality check&amp;rdquo; and                  &amp;ldquo;Exploding the myth&amp;rdquo;. Of course, the very next day, November 5,                  the referee in the guise of a Quebec Superior Court raised a                  hand and counted Onex out. Perhaps Onex should have learned a                  lesson from the banks and their failed 1998 attempt at mergers.                  That too was a huge media-relations exercise and one which many                  observers feel the banks bungled. &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; The proposed mergers involved Royal Bank of Canada with Bank of                  Montreal, and Canadian Imperial Bank of Commerce with                  Toronto-Dominion Bank. The banks ran ads that talked about                  everything from reducing service charges to increasing branch                  access. The idea, the banks said, was to make them stronger and                  more competitive. But the public had a hard time seeing the                  banks as suffering. In 1998 the Big Six (including Bank of Nova                  Scotia and National Bank of Canada) ran up a combined $7.13                  billion in profit. In 1999 - the year after the mergers were                  nixed by Finance Minister Paul Martin - their profits were even                  higher, a combined $9.1 billion. And with those profits came                  staff cuts. &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; The story behind the story is that, in the international scheme                  of things, the banks really are falling behind. In a ranking                  based on shareholder equity, a British-based financial magazine                  called Euromoney rated Canada's five biggest banks from 49th to                  69th. Compare this to 14 years ago when Royal Bank was 22nd                  while CIBC, then the smallest of Canada's five biggest banks,                  was 39th which is ten spots behind where Royal is now. &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; Still, the general consensus is that we should all be in as                  rough shape as our banks. As for the airlines, Air Canada is                  going to rule, but will it be a benevolent dictator worthy of                  our trust? Some think not. And did its battle with Onex even                  produce a cut-and-dried result in the image wars? The victor is                  getting all kinds of flack these days about how it will                  monopolize the skies, raise ticket prices and cut service. And                  what about Schwartz and Onex? Here's the last word from Air                  Canada's Cooke: &amp;ldquo;Well, if it was their intention to become a                  household name, they certainly achieved that.&amp;rdquo;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Appeared in Lexpert Magazine&lt;br /&gt; Copyright Jerry Amernic&lt;/p&gt;</description>
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      <title>Avoid Writing the "No-News Release"</title>
      <description>&lt;p align="left"&gt;PR Tactics (U.S.)&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p align="left"&gt;It was the first day of a writing                  workshop for a group of agency consultants. We finally got                  around to the litmus-test -- the news release. I handed out a                  page filled with excerpts from all the releases they had                  submitted earlier and asked for rewrites. But with news, not                  hype. There's a big difference and any journalist can see it                  immediately.&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; The no-news release is full of long sentences overloaded with                  adjectives saying how wonderful and marvelous something is. It                  reeks of benefits about the product, company or service:                  'Auction Server is a unique real-time auction hosting software                  application that enables Web users to participate in live                  Internet auctions through continuous communication with other                  bidders and an auctioneer.' Oh yes, it also uses words like                  'enables' instead of 'lets' or 'allows'. The one thing it lacks                  is news. Hard news. Breaking news. The one ingredient that                  actually makes it a news release.&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; Some time ago The New Yorker ran a cartoon called 'PR Hell'                  showing consultants entering a cave. Over their heads were the                  words 'Abandon all hype ye who enter here'. We in the industry                  should post it over our desks as a reminder whenever our                  creative juices start heating up and common sense goes into                  retreat.&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; This is not to say a new release can't be creative. Of course it                  can. But the creativity comes from attracting the interest of                  the reader and effectively 'selling' the story. What public                  relations consultants often forget when they're writing copy is                  that same reader. The primary reader for a news release is not                  the prospect who might be itching to buy your client's new                  product and it's not the client. It's a reporter, an editor on                  the news desk at a paper, or a news director at a radio or TV                  station. In other words, that primary reader is a journalist.&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; There is no telling how many releases come across news desks                  every day, but one thing is for sure -- it's a lot more than PR                  consultants realize. The 5'2" editorial secretary for a daily                  newspaper once posed with a stack of news releases received by                  her news room over the course of a year. The stack, piled on the                  floor next to her, was exactly the same height.&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; Consultants must learn that their precious clients are competing                  for the attention of all those gatekeepers as we like to call                  them. The only way to attract that attention is by offering the                  goods and by talking the media's language when doing so.&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; 'Interactive industrial control manufacturing programs developed                  by Edwards Real-Time Systems can be integrated with imaging                  dynamic access Just-In-Time delivery to produce software                  development integral ground plane cost differentials.'&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; This one breaks just about every rule in the book. It's full of                  jargon. The sentence -- just the one -- is too long. There are                  far too many adjectives and too many confusing words bunched                  together. And unless you're the production floor manager at                  Edwards Real-Time Systems chances are you don't even know what                  it's about. As for news, well what exactly is it?&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; Here's another. 'Yesterday the Caribbean Islands' water-filled                  transit shelter was launched at the corner of 5th and 49th                  Streets, creating the magic of the Caribbean above and below the                  waves. The shelter, which has been designed to stimulate the                  underwater experience of the Caribbean, is a first. Surrounded                  by blue, bubbling water, the shelter's walls also house a scuba                  diver and an array of multicolored fish, made life-like with the                  wonders of Digital Imaging Technology Corp.'&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; This also was from a writing workshop and the consultant was                  proud of her work. "I thought it wasn't bad," she said and it                  isn't bad -- for a piece of marketing or advertising copy maybe                  -- but not a news release.&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; Most journalists, never mind deadline-hardened veterans who cut                  their eye teeth covering the courts or council, can readily                  distinguish a well prepared news release from a bit of bumpf.                  The trick is get back to the old inverted pyramid and think like                  a reporter!&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; One of my favorite handouts is an article by a PR practitioner                  who is a former journalist. It's called 'Doing media relations                  like a reporter' and one of his bullets says this: 'As a media                  relations person, you job is to publicize, not market. This is a                  common mistake that many PR people make, especially those with                  marketing backgrounds.'&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; So what to do? An attention-getting headline is a good way to                  start, but not such a good way if it sacrifices accuracy for the                  blast factor. 'New web site geared to young investors' or                  'Survey shows production employees unhappy' might not win any                  awards for snappy writing, but they will be better received than                  'Kids make nutritious snacks' or 'Miners won't work after                  death'.&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; The lead should be just that. A lead. 'Work will start today on                  Micro Support Systems' new research-and-technology center that                  is expected to change the industry'. The trick is to get the                  reader's attention while providing a semblance of the story. If                  you've done a good job, the reader will want to continue. Also                  if you've done a good job, you will target the release to the                  right people which means you don't send a high-tech story to the                  education reporter unless, of course, there is an angle that is                  of interest.&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt; For what not to do in a news release, here's a list of some                  common mistakes:&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;li&gt; Too much hype and not enough news. &lt;/li&gt;
&lt;li&gt; The release and its individual sentences are too long. &lt;/li&gt;
&lt;li&gt; No spokesperson. &lt;/li&gt;
&lt;li&gt; Too many spokespersons. &lt;/li&gt;
&lt;li&gt; Not geared to the reader.&lt;/li&gt;
&lt;/ul&gt;
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&lt;p align="left"&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Copyright Jerry Amernic&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt;</description>
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      <category>Consulting Articles</category>
      <pubDate>Tue, 25 Jan 2000 14:06:00 -0500</pubDate>
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